Meh. I hate HL Sound FX
The constant use of Half-Life sound effects, although adequete, are REALLY damn annoying. I have played that game for like 5 years and it has started to annoy me to see when people use half-life sound fx. Also, i think that you shouldn't have done robots, or whatever those damn one-eyed things. A quick word of advice, put more thought into the way the character wins, you could have made that much longer. Also, what is it about anyway? Just try harder next time. It was better than my first movie, but not great. Needs improvement.